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Time comes, time goes... by ~dreamerstar234:icondreamerstar234:



We have time,
That is so long in front of us.
We have time,
That goes so fast,
And pass us.
But don’t use that time,
To doubt yourself.
Don’t use that time,
To look down among yourself.
Please stop,
For its wasting time,
When you can use it to enjoy it,
But your not,
And time fly’s by.
You were 5,
When it all started.
Now your lying to everyone,
That you don’t,
But you still do.
And look,
You 20,
See how it goes?
You never got to enjoy what you had left,
And now your 40.
Death is near,
And you never enjoyed what you had left,
All those years that you had,
Went by in a flash,
And death has come to ask you,
What you enjoyed,
What you love,
What you want,
And what you wish.
He takes his sword,
And kills you with one sweet motion,
Now you’re on the ground,
Covered in blood,
Covered in tears,
Because you didn’t enjoy,
Something that was given to you.
Those who doubt,
Please be better,
Because time fly’s by fast,
Like a drip of water,
Hitting the floor.
©2006-2009 ~dreamerstar234
:icondreamerstar234:

Author's Comments

well, all those years that i had looked down on myself and say myself as a piece of filthy ass shit, i noticed time went by so quickly, like a blink of an eye. soon i realized, i was not alone. that there are many who are like me, and that i should enjoy life, that i should help them as much as i can. it was hard at first, but you will make it though. just try, and believe in yourself, i promise you, it will work. those who feel like this, please, i know how you feel. just stop doubting yourself, because your wasting time that is precious to us, and memories you could have. just get better, i hope this helps you.

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:iconlilgothikkitten:
I like your concept of time, many people think time is by their side but time waits for no one not even the richest of mans.

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:censored: brain cells come and go but fat cells live forever :censored:

:boing: I took an IQ test and the results came back negative... :boing:
:icondreamerstar234:
yes, that is true. that is why i put it as this, that is why i made this poem, because many use there time for the moast worst reasons, when they can do better things of it. thank you!!!

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Stay strong.
:iconlilgothikkitten:
your walcome byt he ways its realy good :)

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:censored: brain cells come and go but fat cells live forever :censored:

:boing: I took an IQ test and the results came back negative... :boing:
:icondreamerstar234:
thank you so so much!!!!!!!!!!!!! glad you liked it!!!! : :XD: :hug: :glomp: :cuddle:

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Stay strong.
:iconlilgothikkitten:
=)

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:censored: brain cells come and go but fat cells live forever :censored:

:boing: I took an IQ test and the results came back negative... :boing:
:iconsigonha:
yup...true. i don't know shit about poetry and that, but this is cool
:icondreamerstar234:
thank you!!!!! hey, you dont need to know shit about poetry, but as long as you understand it, then thats good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its ok... i know nothing about grammer and all that shit, so i can relate. thank you so much!!!!!

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Stay strong.
:icondraunaturel:
do you think of your poems as songs? do you hear them to music?

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...draunaturel
:icondreamerstar234:
does it sound like a song? i dont know................. what do you think?

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Stay strong.

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